Against the Authority of Rank, a heartbeat of slack is a candle snuffed—death as the closing line.
Nivifar invoked her Rank Authority Domain, seized a shard of concept that belonged to Andor, and plucked my heart like fruit off a branch.
Pain surged first, then motion followed. I dropped to one knee, bracing with my Greatsword like a pillar, refusing to fall like a toppled statue.
Mana roared like floodwater, scrambling to rebalance my fluids; I wove a temporary heart from Shadow, a black lotus beating so I wouldn’t die.
“You’re small,” she said, voice cool as frost, “and I’m no colossus either. Why chase Stini’s impossible star?”
A sting first, then a grin. “Hey, since when did calling a legendary warrior ‘small’ become the new creed?”
“Because the world is a grindstone,” she sighed, bitterness like iron in rain. “Even legends die. My mercenary band looked lush as a forest. I thought we’d root here, then march to wider lands. A sudden Thornhook Beetle charged in and butchered half. What would you feel?”
Her mood brightened like a lantern lit, and she let the words spill like beads from a broken string.
The more she spoke, the steadier my pulse; profit first, reply second. “Guilt?”
“The right answer is disappointment,” she whispered, “a chest echoing hollow like an empty hall.”
Nivifar stepped close, fingers soft as silk and slick as gore, and stroked my hair like a lover wearing a butcher’s glove.
“I raised three squads led by legends,” she murmured, voice brittle as glass. “An ambush broke them at first clash. Sure, bad orders played their part. After that I learned: what we deem solid is sand, and a tide can wipe it clean.”
“Is that why you traded with the devil?”
“You know about my deal?” Her smile cut like a thin knife. “Looks like the devil resold it three ways. I’ll collect on that. But yes—you’re right. I grew sick of a crystal world, lovely on the skin, fragile in the bone.”
“Then join us. The Hero Squad has a cockroach’s stubborn life, hard to stamp.”
“Too late,” she said, weary as dusk. She gripped my skull like a vice and squeezed, intent to shatter me like clay.
She paused, eyes narrowing. “Hm? Why didn’t it break?”
Amusement first, answer next. “Because Legendary magic. Say ‘Legendary,’ and doubts fall like leaves. Plot holes bow and leave.”
I caught her wrist like snaring wind, pushed on the Greatsword, and rose slow as a mountain lifting fog.
All right then—my turn to look cool. Among Demonfolk, strength is the language; will rides muscle and speaks as iron. Nivifar is half-demon now, her thoughts stained like ink in water. If I don’t show force, she won’t listen to breath or reason.
Pseudo-Legendary magic: Defiant Death. First verse—Battle-Soul Unbroken.
Its debut came in the retreat against the Demon King of Slaughter, when I ate a magic weapon that embodied “irresistible annihilation,” the Giant Scythe.
By rights, a touch of Slaughter’s concept is a chisel on life. If Anna raises that scythe within a city, sight alone brands the crowd with the concept of “being killed,” and bodies drop like felled wheat.
In this Silver Era, everything sits on concepts, yet falls short of concepts. Concept resistance is hard to grind; even Heroes choke on that iron.
The only road is targeted resistance against the idea itself, a shield forged to fit a single blade.
If “being killed” is a river that drags the living toward death, how do you swim upstream? Mortal thought stops at “Make me undying,” a simple spell on a complex tide.
You could strip life and death from your field, run parallel to Slaughter like two rails. But that’s gods-and-demons work; even a Son of the Demon King can’t force that hinge. Mortals, never.
My design for Defiant Death isn’t a lifespan stretched like taffy. It’s refusal—a draft notice from Death returned to sender. I stand between life and undying; as long as mana burns, I fight like a lantern in wind.
Soft flesh and skin can tear like paper; organs don’t matter in the storm. Only bone must not break. The concept of “Battle-Soul Unbroken” is tempered to its limit—if I still have will, I drive the magic and move this body like a war drum.
Of course, after each bout, go find a Divine Healer and bless me with a Soul Return Prayer, or I’ll sleep like a stone in cold water.
Demon Kings don’t use Legendary magic; it’s low-yield for them. They flex Authority and order concepts like generals ordering troops.
If I wished, I could mimic a Legendary by domain alone—link bone to the root of Shadow in this world, and make it ageless, like a pillar unfaded by centuries.
I could let mana puppet my limbs, control the fight like a puppeteer pulling strings, not by blood heat and roar.
By the script, this is just the first verse of Legendary magic, a patch job built to counter Anna, that Son of the Demon King of Slaughter tangled with the Hero by fate and thorn.
If the Hero Squad gathers, Nivifar is miles below Anna. Even Rank looks ordinary against a full party. But today trouble piles like stormclouds and knocks together.
First, I must solo Nivifar. No Stini, no Immunity Privilege beside me, no dragging the Authority-holder off the throne into grit and stone. I have to swallow heaven-wrath strikes like boulders dropped on a shield.
Second, Rank’s Authority Domain is special, a lock shaped for keys like the Hero Squad, neat and cruel.
Nivifar moved fast. She flicked her hand, and a hurricane howled like an organ, shredding half the warped palace into flying teeth.
The ground cracked in layers like dry clay; the patch under my boots stayed whole as a coin. I pulled the Greatsword free like a stake and didn’t take a step back.
“Why…”
“Battle-soul unbroken. War-will unspent. Hot blood uncooled. This body is built for a hundred battles, and for ten thousand I won’t retreat.”
I paused, letting style hang like a banner. “My Legendary magic, Defiant Death—it plays well, doesn’t it?”
“Do I have the right to talk to you now?”
Surprise flickered, then Nivifar smiled like a torturer lighting a candle. “If you insist on a painful death, I won’t stand in your way.”
Her words rang wrong, like a chord bent out of tune—sadness and disappointment woven with anger and fatigue, a wish to smash the world and cradle it in the same breath.
I kept my guard like a tower with a blade, and I probed, voice soft as rain. “Nivifar, you regret this, don’t you?”
“Are you kidding me.”
She roared, emotion raw as a rip. Her attack rhythm hiccuped, a heartbeat off—a crack in the drum.
Huh. That simple?
The black curse-script misting around her body sprouted new arms like night vines. Six arms, six weapons, each a moon with its own light:
A blunt greatsword—each heavy strike sent a shock through me like an earthquake, loosening flesh from bone like mortar from stone.
An ornate dagger—when it kissed close, I shoved Nivifar off with the Greatsword, but the blade shaved my chest clean like a razor on bark.
A compound sword-shield with jagged back-teeth—attack and defense danced like twin wolves, slash and smash timed to zero gaps, the counter crisp and near-perfect.
A spiked chain-net—its grip froze my motion like frost, pain twitching muscles in spasms, barbs biting like a swarm of ants.
A tri-edged spear—its wound bled like a river, the barbed backward hook snagging bone to lock my retreat.
A double-headed axe—the most dangerous bite, its damage a boulder, my mana burning by buckets to hold the line.
Six different weapons moved in Nivifar’s hands with eerie grace, like six fighters sharing one breath and one spine. Bug-tier nonsense. Without Defiant Death, my life would be counted in seconds, dripping like sand through glass.
By now, I had seven or eight dozen mortal wounds carved like tally marks—most had already stitched shut like leaves closing at dusk.
I laughed anyway, dodging blades like swallows under eaves. To Nivifar, it had to look like mockery. She wasn’t wrong; I had a little of that spice.
Good. I’d found the hinge.
The devil said, “I can’t disclose much, but think it through and you can save Nivifar.” Priest-talk, a fog that hides the road.
Turns out it’s this level of trouble. Ordinary girl, ordinary knot. She did a wrong thing, and regret gnaws like a mouse in the wall. The heart is that simple.
Find the root, then pry with words. Demonfolk are born to this. I kept teasing Nivifar like tapping a drum.
“When you love a thing, you want it. That’s human marrow. No shame in that at all.”
She didn’t answer. Her axes and blades kept falling like rain.
I leaned into the Greatsword’s spine, deflecting most slashes and smashes like bats off a bell. I hid behind the blade and stepped back, steady as a tide.
“Is that all your tricks? You talked like thunder, then went soft like fog?”
Why rage when words can win? If this can be solved with a mouth, why go berserk and crack seeds?
“You want to be a Hero…”
“Absolutely not!”
“You want status like a Hero. So you begged the devil, and got duped. Sad, and a little funny.”
I spat blood and laughed, the taste like copper and heat. Maybe five liters by now—my body felt light as wind. Great for movement—no, that’s a lie. Let’s sit down, talk this out, and go home for dinner, yes?
Nivifar’s warmth vanished like embers drowned. Impurity burned away; what remained was malice and killing intent, sharp as frost.
“Andor, is mocking me fun?” she asked, voice cold as a blade drawn.
“Yeah. Meeting someone dumber than Stini is rare like a blue comet.”
“Ha. I’m the idiot then, to have fallen for a bastard like you.”
Maybe I pushed too hard. It’s fine—lose a bit more meat, keep the bones singing.
Black color dripped from the crown on Nivifar’s head like tar, and the world darkened as if stained.
She seemed taller, rising toward the Starry Sky Divine Kingdom like a shadow tower. It was illusion; what climbed was her rank, her place on that invisible ladder.
Rank is a peculiar concept. Not optional fluff like “Redundancy,” not grand bedrock like “Death” or “Brutality.” It sits middle—too neat to be noble, too strict to be soft. It bullies the low and never beats me or Anna.
The Son of the Demon King of Rank—my not-so-adorable brother, Biyag—has plenty of peers at that power tier. Rank looks plain on first sight, but it carries a special trait:
Absolute dominion downwards, absolute defeat upwards.
Authority Domains play unique, shaped by their concept’s bones. Rank is ladders, lines, and limits—levels clear, steps forbidden, measure tight. I’ve only seen Biyag’s repertoire of such tricks.
Even this surface of Rank’s trait is enough to keep Stini off the field.
Biyag’s power guards the ladder. Stini’s Immunity Privilege drags the high off their seat. The two collide, like flint and steel with nowhere to rest.
When they meet, it’s kill or be killed, win or be broken. No room for Stini’s favorite rhetoric of backbone.
Earlier, Stini lost the Holy Sword to a steal and fell to a sneak attack. That proved Rank checks Immunity Privilege like stone over paper.
She’s weaker now. I won’t let her fight. If Nivifar kills her and no Divine Healer stands nearby, that road ends at a cliff.
As for me, it’s easier. The Endless Demon King grants an absolute not-dying—my last health bar locks like iron. In human shape, even losing is not dying; I’m a stubborn ember.
On toughness alone, I claim male lead with a grin.
Nivifar’s whole body soaked in dark, filthy light, lifting to a plane mortals can’t touch. The earth bowed under her feet like worshipers. Mountains leaned in to hear. Stars traced circles like hawks on the wing.
She had stepped past the mortal kind, into the farther shore of power.
That light, even soiled, was too bright. Looking hurt like needles under the eyelids, as if hands tried to scoop the eyes out. Within my sight, she shed the shape of “human,” became oddly grand, beyond words for ugliness or beauty.
Her blade and ax had shed mortal rules, speed and force ignored like feathers in a storm.
When Nivifar brought them down, she dropped a whole world.
Mountains and rivers, sun and moon, stars crashed toward me—heaven's might rolling like thunder.
Thank the local authorities; their evacuation ran like a tide pulling back.
Nivifar’s every swing was a map-wide blast; otherwise the town would be a field of winter bones.
Nivifar’s ruin stretched from the town center to the mountain rim.
Her destructive waves ground every cover to dust; no ruins, only bare earth like dunes after a gale.
Looks like the city will need a full rebuild.
Should I invest here, plant a base like a pine on a cliff?
Money's a river for me; a spare harbor beats drifting without one.
The twisted palace was already smashed, shards falling like ice from a cracked sky.
Her world-collapsing strikes seemed to cost no mana; Nivifar used them like normal swings.
Humiliation burned like ash in my throat on the first hit.
I pushed Shadow to patch the wounds, to puppeteer my body's functions like strings under moonlight.
But Nivifar’s blows left no dawn for recovery.
I threw myself into the Godspeed Realm, a gale flensing flesh from bone, and cut once.
Nivifar answered with six strikes in that heartbeat, faster and heavier, like hail—how do you fight that?
With Stini gone, a Hero gets dangled and beaten by a Demon King, like a kite in a storm.
Godspeed Realm is just a stepping stone among gods and demons.
True ones peel "time" off themselves in battle—an instant becomes an endless sea.
Thankfully Nivifar, uplifted by the Ocean of Darkness, hasn't reached that shore.
A wry realization slid in like cold rain: my read was wrong.
No time to drink HolyWater for mana; the vials at my chest shattered like glass frost.
That thought flickered as my whole body broke, bones ringing like bells.
The "underwear never breaks" law is real here, a charm in the weave like bark hugging a tree.
Because underwear counts as body; Iron Fortification treats it as skin, and impacts don’t tear it.
But my flesh-to-bone links were shaken apart; joints splayed like scattered beads.
Without my undying trait already online, there’d be no defense worth the name.
So the tactical pockets sewn onto the underwear still tore, frayed like nets in a storm.