Tiredness comes and goes quickly. After an hour of sleep, Xu Fang woke up. Of course, he was the only one left in the classroom. Most of the other people had gone to eat or to other classrooms to prepare for the next class.
Looking at the time, it was almost one o'clock. But it was not too late for lunch, so Xu Fang went to the cafeteria and had something to eat. While eating, he used his phone to finish the remaining 1,000 words.
It was enough for 3,000 words to be posted.
Clicked "publish", then jumped to the "under review" page.
--I thought everything would go back to the way it was, but then something unexpected happened.
Just as the day's classes were over and Xu Fang and Xiaoming were leaving school, Xu Fang received a message.
[Hello, Author.
In view of the fact that you have not updated your novel for a long time, this website comes to remind you to update your novel.
Please update your novel within 48 hours. If you don't update it, your life will be in danger.
--Horror Novel Web】
The message is brief and concise, with a polite tone that is frightening.
"You are in danger of losing your life."
Horror Novel Web definitely does what it says!
Xu Fang frowned slightly, he had already uploaded the latest chapter, why did Horror Novel Web still want to push for more?
Xu Fang had a bad feeling.
"Hey, where are we going to eat dinner?" Luo Xiaoming didn't notice Xu Fang's mood and was still thinking about where to go next.
"Whatever..." Xu Fang returned perfunctorily.
"What the heck! You should be more explicit ......"
Ignoring Ming's complaints, Xu Fang clicked into Horror Novel Web's author backstage page, and a red message bar popped up.
[Sorry, your latest chapter has violated the fifth rule of "Horror Novel Web": The plot does not make sense, please revise it and re-publish it. The system automatically deducts 1 point from you. ]
What is this?
Xu Fang was stunned and stared at this message in a daze.
How could the plot not make sense? How could the plot be unreasonable? His story was following the usual routine step by step, and the plot was developing according to the setting.
"Xu Fang!"
was shaken by a small white hand.
Xu Fang came back to his senses and found Xiaoming standing in front of him, gazing at him worriedly.
"What's wrong with you Xu Fang, it feels like you've been acting weird all day, is something wrong?"
"Ah, no." Xu Fang smiled and grabbed Xiaoming's hand that kept shaking, "It's just some discomfort, nothing serious."
The contact of finger and palm, a very warm feeling.
"This, so ah ......" Xiaoming unnaturally retracted his hand, her mind a little confused for a moment, forgetting what to say, "Since you're not feeling well, go home."
Home? ......Xu Fang reacted, although understanding where home is, but always feel strange.
"It's the rented room, rented room!" Noticing the wrong wording, Luo Xiaoming blushed and hurriedly corrected.
On the way home, no one spoke.
Luo Xiaoming kept his head down, not knowing what he was thinking about, occasionally stealing a glance at Xu Fang, and immediately shifting her gaze again.
Xu Fang, on the other hand, was thinking about Horror Novel Web.
Any problems encountered in writing can only be solved by the author himself, it is useless to ask customer service. In this regard, customer service will not reply with any useful information.
Horror Novel Web says his plot doesn't make sense, so what exactly doesn't make sense?
Xu Fang recalled the story he created from beginning to end.
The protagonist of the story, Lin Jingrui, transformed and looked disastrous due to the failure of the facial transformation of the Intimidation System.
The intimidation system issued one intimidation task after another to the protagonist. As long as the task is completed, the protagonist's appearance can become beautiful little by little.
The first system let the protagonist intimidate the star, the second system let the protagonist intimidate the richman, the third let the protagonist intimidate the robber. The intimidation system likes to issue such tasks and let the protagonist intimidate all kinds of people.
The first two tasks of the system were completed perfectly, and since the system store was closed, Xu Fang created a random "Die free card", which he could not get anyway.
Now Xu Fang is wrapping up the third story. That is, the protagonist succeeded in terrorizing and reaping the reward of the mission - the card.
Everything should be going smoothly, but Horror Novel Web suddenly said that the plot of Xu Fang does not make sense. The bad thing is, since Xu Fang has been broken for a few days, it's already time for a reminder.
As the saying goes, there are no two blessings and no two woes.
Now Xu Fang has to revise the plot and re-release it. Not counting the review time, there are only 48 hours left for Xu Fang, that is to say, if Xu Fang does not write a reasonable plot within this time, his life will be in danger.
Damned website, why are you so difficult to serve! Where is the promise to create whatever you want?
Xu Fang couldn't help but curse Horror Novel Web in his heart.
went back to his apartment and ordered two take-aways. After eating, Xu Fang threw himself onto the bed.
According to past habits, Luo Xiaoming would go out and surf the Internet until eight or nine o'clock, but after becoming a girl, she usually didn't go out much at night.
After turning out her pajamas and a change of underwear, Xiaoming prepared to take a shower. But after pulling open the bottom drawer, she always felt something was wrong.
Xiaoming bought a lot of underwear according to her size, by way of online shopping. This way she doesn't have to worry about the intimate apparel. Xiaoming did not dare to buy too bright and revealing style, clear all conservative white. This is how the single stuffed closet.
But this time there seems to be less underwear folded in the drawer - maybe it's an illusion?
"Xu Fang, that ...... you went through my closet?" Luo Xiaoming asked.
"Eh? What do you mean?" Xu Fang, who was still thinking about the problem next door, was interrupted in his thoughts and was first shocked when he heard Xiaoming's question.
The corpse had been disposed of perfectly, even Xiaoming's mucus-laden underwear had been burned to ashes by Gussi.
Did Xiaoming find out?
Xu Fang was about to pretend that he didn't know.
"--Ah, it's nothing." Ming said back.
The careless Ming, of course, did not pay attention to details, picked up a change of clothes and went to take a shower.
Xu Fang was relieved to have been able to get away with it. He opened his laptop, went to the Horror Novel Web author's back office, and clicked on the chapter that had been rejected.
The chapter was about the end of the third mission of the Intimidation System, the main character successfully completed the mission and received the mission reward. If you want to say where the plot does not make sense ...... is probably the task of the reward is too generous point?
The intimidation system not only gave the protagonist a death-free card, but also a small adjustment of physical fitness, appearance, etc.. The protagonist will have sharper eyesight, hearing, perception.
Perhaps Horror Novel Web feels that such a transformation is too unbalanced. If it continues, the protagonist will one day turn into a powerful being, right?
The main character of the story is the one who is the most powerful. Maybe there will be some minor setbacks occasionally, but they will always be overcome.
It's just a novel anyway, why can't it be better?
Maybe Horror Novel Web is not a fan of this formula, and Xu Fang thinks he needs to consider the development of the story carefully, especially the setting of the power system.
After revising the story, Xu Fang deleted the "enhancement and transformation" of the protagonist by the intimidation system, and weakened the protagonist's intimidation ability. The other details were fine-tuned, and a few typos were corrected.
--Finally, I think it's perfect.
I'm sure it will be approved this time," Xu Fang thought, and resubmitted the manuscript.
Horror Novel Web often takes a long time to review a first submission, but the review time for a second submission becomes very short.
Xu Fang's review result came out within an hour or so.
Sorry, your latest chapter violated the fifth rule of "Horror Novel Web": The plot does not make sense, please revise it and republish it. The system automatically deducts 1 point from you.
Review did not pass!
The review failed twice!
Seeing this result, Xu Fang felt a darkness before his eyes.
Something is wrong with ...... ......
What to do? There is still one more chance to review, what should I do?
The omen of uncertainty was becoming more and more obvious.
"It's time to - update - new - "
The cold voice passed through Xu Fang's eardrum into the auditory center. The scent of death made Xu Fang jolt and twist his head to look around, but found nothing.
Phantom hearing? No!
There was something lying in his ear and talking! And now it was standing there!
Alarm bells went off in his mind.
Xu Fang immediately connected to Gussy's body and darted out of the box under the bed. With wide demon eyes, he scanned the surroundings of his body.
In Gussy's vision, as if it were a black hole, was a pure black object that did not contain any point of light.
As if sensing the demon's gaze, a black object flashed quickly from behind Xu Fang into the corner and disappeared.
The black shadow was so fast that it took less than 0.01 seconds from the time it was spotted to the time it disappeared. But with Gussy's horrible dynamic vision, Xu Fang still saw clearly the disappearing thing - the Black Shadow Man!
A black shadow man exactly like the Customer Service Consultation Center.
